After realizing how dumb I am, thanks to a fellow blogger. I'm posting the first part of my last love story which I was editing and didn't post because I'm clumsy. I Hope you enjoy it:
"I'm not a bad person, well... maybe just a little.
I'm pissed because it's raining, don't get me wrong I love rainy days, but not this one because I can't get of my house. Meanwhile, I'm going to tell you a love story, a bit wierd, a bit fun, a bit too mine.
Everything began on this year's february, days were flying then. I was beggining my semester at college and everything was mostly.... gray. My daily routines were.... well, routines. I woke up, went to school, go back home, sleep, sometimes after school some friends and I would go to the mall, and these times, were pretty cool. One of those days at the mall, I saw the most beautiful girl I've ever seen, well at least working at any food court, and I liked her, like... really really liked her. Yet I didn't do anything, it was like "Oh cool, a cute girl *keeps eating* yeah, she's nice"
Days kept going and Valentine's day was coming to town, I prefer to call it Merchandise day, I think it fits better. It wasn't valentine's yet when I decide to pass by her stand and ask for their menu, she smiled at me and let me take one. I wasn't really interested on the menu, I wanted to talk to her, so I thanked, and I was about to leave and before I turned back to my friends, I told her how beautiful she was. She blushed and thanked me..."
This was the first unposted part, this story is going to be a little long, I hope you're liking it, and if you do, come back to see what happens
you have a nice writing style.
ReplyDeleteI definitely will be checking back on this. great story so far.
ReplyDeleteDoes the story get steamy? ;) Nice so far.
ReplyDeleteso finally i understand the part 2, so you have balls to talk to a cute girl, congrat
ReplyDeleteregards
@Grossero Well, yes, it's getting stamy but it's a long way
ReplyDeletenice :P
ReplyDelete:)
ReplyDeleteThank you for post. Will be looking into it.
ReplyDeleteAh there we go, makes much more sense now.
ReplyDeletecaptivating story, looking forward to seeing how this goes. Followed +
ReplyDeletegreat story
ReplyDeleteI'll end up following you.
ReplyDeleteYou really need to write more stories.
ReplyDeleteLoving the story so far... You got me at Merchandise day. That day sucks.. you should love girls and people in general everyday
ReplyDeleteYou could write a book man, great post
ReplyDeleteNice story bro
ReplyDeletethis was a great post man, keep it up
ReplyDeleteWow, this is a nice story.
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