Friday, August 26, 2011

I don't wish you enemies Part 1

After realizing how dumb I am, thanks to a fellow blogger. I'm posting the first part of my last love story which I was editing and didn't post because I'm clumsy. I Hope you enjoy it:

"I'm not a bad person, well... maybe just a little.

I'm pissed because it's raining, don't get me wrong I love rainy days, but not this one because I can't get of my house. Meanwhile, I'm going to tell you a love story, a bit wierd, a bit fun, a bit too mine.
Everything began on this year's february, days were flying then. I was beggining my semester at college and everything was mostly.... gray. My daily routines were.... well, routines. I woke up, went to school, go back home, sleep, sometimes after school some friends and I would go to the mall, and these times, were pretty cool. One of those days at the mall, I saw the most beautiful girl I've ever seen, well at least working at any food court, and I liked her, like... really really liked her. Yet I didn't do anything, it was like "Oh cool, a cute girl *keeps eating* yeah, she's nice"


Days kept going and Valentine's day was coming to town, I prefer to call it Merchandise day, I think it fits better. It wasn't valentine's yet when I decide to pass by her stand and ask for their menu, she smiled at me and let me take one. I wasn't really interested on the menu, I wanted to talk to her, so I thanked, and I was about to leave and before I turned back to my friends, I told her how beautiful she was. She blushed and thanked me..."


This was the first unposted part, this story is going to be a little long, I hope you're liking it, and if you do, come back to see what happens

19 comments:

  1. you have a nice writing style.

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  2. I definitely will be checking back on this. great story so far.

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  3. Does the story get steamy? ;) Nice so far.

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  4. so finally i understand the part 2, so you have balls to talk to a cute girl, congrat

    regards

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  5. @Grossero Well, yes, it's getting stamy but it's a long way

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  6. Thank you for post. Will be looking into it.

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  7. Ah there we go, makes much more sense now.

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  8. captivating story, looking forward to seeing how this goes. Followed +

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  9. You really need to write more stories.

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  10. Loving the story so far... You got me at Merchandise day. That day sucks.. you should love girls and people in general everyday

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  11. this was a great post man, keep it up

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  12. Wow, this is a nice story.

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